I've had a lot of fun playing with Suzaku so far, you've done a really good job combining his servile and determined aspects! I just have one thing I've noticed in threading with you that's given me a little trouble; you have a tendency to drop grammar in a way that makes your tags a bit hard to parse. For example, grabbing this (https://thenearshore.dreamwidth.org/284044.html?thread=66117004#cmt66117004) first comment off a flatview of the training log, that first bit of dialogue looks a bit like it's running into itself written like that ("I'm not, it's just..." flows a bit more naturally) and you've dropped the full stop at the end of the second dialogue line and done it again in the narration of the tag after this one in the thread. And this one might be more just me personally finding it odd to read, but you tend to comma splice a lot (splitting with a comma what should be two separate sentences) while other times not breaking up a sentence with commas when it would make it flow better. I'm guessing there's some kind of reason for it, and I still really like threading with you regardless of it, but I think changing up the grammar a little could go a long way towards clarity for your thread partners.